Fiksi SpongeBob_Kartun Rosak

For the first time in my life I encounter and explore the website of FanFiction.net. This website is absolutely interesting and I do really enjoy read all the fictions created by fans of certain categories for instance; (1)anime/manga, (2)cartoons, (3)music, (4)books, (5)movies, (6)plays/musicals, (7)comics, (8)TV shows and (9)games. I did browse for the categories of movies, anime/manga and cartoons as we were asked to read any fans' fiction that we do really attracted to. I do like cartoons, anime/manga and animation movies so, that's the reason why I elected those categories of entertainment. For cartoons, I searched for SpongeBob Squarepants, for anime/manga, I browsed for One Piece and for movies, I chose Wreck-It Ralph. Then, once we done read the fans' fiction that we like, we were asked to give a comment based on the fans' fiction that we did really think so interesting and creativity had pictured in that made-up story. During my fans' fiction browsing activity, I encountered this sad story of dying SpongeBob in loneliness and I think this fiction is so interesting. So, I did leave my comment and suggestion so that she can write better and come out with a super interesting fiction. Here, I provide the URL link of the fiction and my review upon it.

1. http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9778304/1/THE-END
2. http://www.fanfiction.net/r/9778304/

"I quite enjoyed read your make-up fiction of dying SpongeBob. But yours is totally dull and no heart-tearing descriptive conflict to reach the climax. When I made to the last word I feel no pity towards SpongeBob. However, you still have a good effort and creativity in make-up that sadness in SpongeBob' character who finally encounters death. Just few of us gonna think like that as we wonder that SpongeBob kinda happy-go-lucky and outgoing guy and we might think he gonna die in happiness. But you split that myth as in for me, and visualize his death in words with sorrowful and loneliness. Good job!"   

Actually, I really think that this kind of activity is able to trigger students' creativity in creating a narrative fiction based on their twisted thinking towards the original version of plot of the story they elected. They can write as many fictions as they want to and receive feedback through the reviews or comments given by the readers or followers. Besides of fiction, they are also encouraged to write any kind of academic writings or facts based on the categories they feel attracted to. This in-class activity is surely be able to enhance students' creativity in narrative writing essay and enriching their ideas to write fictions.